Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下線索寫一篇句意連貫的小故事。

1.我嬸嬸一直和她的一個(gè)新鄰居相處得不好，嬸嬸說他看起來很不友好;

2.一天，我嬸嬸回到家，發(fā)現(xiàn)她昨天剛買的項(xiàng)鏈不見了;

3.她回想自己去過哪兒，覺得可能是那個(gè)鄰居偷了她的項(xiàng)鏈，因此她決定立刻報(bào)警;

4.突然有人敲門，原來是她的新鄰居;

5.他手里拿著項(xiàng)鏈，說昨天在門口發(fā)現(xiàn)的;

6.嬸嬸很感激他，并愿意和他交朋友。

Answer 1

【答案】My aunt got along well with all her neighbours except the man who lived next door. My aunt said he didn't look friendly at all.

One day, when my aunt came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new necklace which she had bought the day before. She was very worried. She recalled where she had been just then. She thought that perhaps the man who lived next door had stolen her necklace. So she planned to call the police at once. Just then, someone knocked at the door. It was the young man, her new neighbour. She was shocked that her necklace was in his hand. He told her that he found it at the doorway. And he thought it must be my aunt's, so he came to return it.

Yes, that's true. It was the necklace that my aunt lost. My aunt was very thankful. She told her new neighbour that they could be good friends later.

【解析】【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如get along well with，next door，at all，the day before，just then，at once，knock at，in his hand，at the doorway等。而My aunt said he didn't look friendly at all./ One day, when my aunt came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new necklace which she had bought the day before./ And he thought it must be my aunt's, so he came to return it.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。