Question

13．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"My Ideal School Life"．（以"我理想的學(xué)校生活"為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文）
Suggested question：
1．Is your school life enjoyable？
2．What changes would you like to see in your school？
3．What ideal school life do you want？

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．我想?yún)⒓游腋信d趣的組織．這是一個定語從句．主句would like to do sth想要做某事．join in參加．先行詞organizations組織，用which引導(dǎo)．從句be interested in對…感興趣．
句型二：If you have a problem，you can ask the teacher and classmates for help．如果你有問題，你可以向老師和同學(xué)尋求幫助．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句ask sb for help向某人尋求幫助．if從句用一般現(xiàn)在時，主句用may/might/can．

解答 My ideal school life
  Everyone has their own ideal school．I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful（理想中的學(xué)校生活）．I'm very happy to study in the school．（開心的學(xué)習(xí)）
  We have five classes every day．I like all the lessons，because the lessons are very interesting．And we can choose our favorite lessons to learn．（介紹課程） At noon，we have an hour's rest time．During the rest time，we can chat with classmates．（課間事情）　
I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful．We can play many ball games after school every day．There are many organizations and clubs in our school．I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．（高分句型一） I would like to join many clubs，too．（參加各種俱樂部）　
  Doing homework is part of the school life，but the work is not much，and very easy．（作業(yè)情況）We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher．Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind．If you have a problem，you can ask the teacher and classmates for help．（高分句型二）
  In a word，my ideal school is like this．I hope my dream will come true one day．（愿望）

點評 寫作時要明確要點，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，語法正確，結(jié)合要求，注意作文題材，不要寫跑題．日常積累一些短語和詞句．