Question

5．生活中，一定會(huì)有很多讓你難忘的人或事．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)記錄最讓你感動(dòng)的人或事，以"A person I will never forget"為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
要求如下：1．短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括人物的外貌、性格、愛(ài)好和使你難忘之處等；
2．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名.3．詞數(shù)80左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要確定好所寫(xiě)的人或事，列出要點(diǎn)．注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，以第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)描述，時(shí)態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：play with sb 和某人一起玩
make sth+形容詞，讓…怎么樣
be strict with sb對(duì)某人要求嚴(yán)格
allow sb to do sth讓某人做某事
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher．
句中I'll never forget作person的定語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know．
句中what連接賓語(yǔ)從句，作know的賓語(yǔ)．

解答 A person I will never forget
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher．【高分句型】He's a tall man with thick glasses．He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us．He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting．He's kind but is strict with us．【外貌、性格、愛(ài)好】He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know．【高分句型】He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without．My English has greatly improved with his help．【難忘之處】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需根據(jù)所提供的信息提煉文章的寫(xiě)作主題，需了解寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及寫(xiě)作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)．