Question

【題目】根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇短文介紹自己的家人，朋友，收藏品和愛好。（50詞左右）

Name: Mary

Family: father, mother, brother.

Friends: Cindy, Sam, Alan

Collection（收藏品）：7 baseballs, 5 basketballs, 9 volleyballs

Like: milk, carrots, ice-cream, chicken

Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone, my name is Mary . as you know I am a clever girl. I have a nice family. There is my father , my mother ,my brother and I . My family are all so cute. They are so lovely. we all get on well with each other. Do you know I have three good friends? they are Cindy, Sam and Alan. All of us like to collect balls. In my collection , I have seven baseballs, five basketballs and nine volleyballs. I am not only good at volleyball but also am interested in basketball. I often play balls with my friends after school, so I am very healthy. Besides, I eat very well. I like milk , carrots and chicken every day, although ice-cream is my favourite, I just eat it once a week because it is not so good for my health if I eat it too much. Now , you see, I have a very healthy life.

Thank you so much .that`s all.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求學(xué)生用所學(xué)的英語知識，簡明扼要的寫一篇Mary的自我介紹，其中要包括自己的家庭成員，朋友，業(yè)余愛好和飲食方面。

【亮點說明】該文章能夠嚴(yán)格按照題目要求，全面的寫出各個要點，語言生動，思路清晰，前后行文環(huán)環(huán)相扣，要點連貫，其中不乏漂亮的短語和賓語從句，讓步狀語從句和條件狀語從句。例如，get on well with each other ；not only…but also…; be good at; be interested in; once a week. 賓語從句: Do you know I have three good friends? 讓步狀語從句和條件狀語從句套用：although ice-cream is my favourite, I just eat it once a week because it is not so good for my health if I eat it too much. 所以縱觀全文，不失為一篇佳作。