Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （本大題共5分）

假如你是Sandy,想邀請好友Amy來你家。根據(jù)下面提供的信息，用英語寫一篇邀請信。(包含所有要點，注意格式，字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。)

要點：

1、新家位于市中心，周圍有銀行、超市、醫(yī)院。

2、鄰居們友好善良，經(jīng)常幫助人們解決各種問題,大家就像一家人一樣。

3、家中有很多事可做。……(發(fā)揮1-2句)

4、如果你能來，我會非常高興。沿著幸福路走（Happy Road），在第二個十字路口向右拐。

5、很期待見到你。

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home. My new home is in the centre of the city. There are banks, supermarkets and a hospital around my home. My neighbors are friendly and kind. They often help people with all kinds of problems. People here are like a big family.

There are many things to do in my home. We can have a big dinner. We can also enjoy the films and play games.

If you can come, I will be very happy. Walk along Happy Road and take the second crossing on the right.

I am looking forward to seeing you.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文是Sandy向Amy介紹她家的周圍環(huán)境和鄰居。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I would like to…；There are…，My neighbors are…，We can…以及I am looking forward to…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意完整的表達(dá)出提綱中所列的內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹寫信的目的，邀請Amy到她家來玩，接下來介紹她家的周圍環(huán)境、鄰居、去他家的路線，最后期盼見到Amy。此處would like to do sth, invite sb to do sth, all kinds of, take the second crossing, on the right, look forward to doing sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。