Question

同學(xué)們，時(shí)間過(guò)得真快，去年的寒假生活( winter holiday) 仿佛還在眼前，轉(zhuǎn)眼間，今年的寒假即將到來(lái)，你打算怎樣度過(guò)呢？你是否已經(jīng)下定決心了，是否已經(jīng)計(jì)劃好了？
請(qǐng)你以My coming winter holiday 為題目寫(xiě)80字 左右的短文。
                                                                    
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   

Answer 1

My winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming.I'm very excited.Because this is the matter that I have already expected for a long time.I have made a plan list concerning winter vacation first, so my winter vacation life then can become orderly.I will go some tour spots of China, such as Yellow Mountain,Tai Mountain etc..After that, I will spend some time studying some new knowledge and reviewing the contents of last term. Finally, I’ll stay at home for several days to take a rest. I think this winter vacation will be very meaningful.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我自己的寒假計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如： I have already expected......；I will go ......及I think.......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了寒假即將來(lái)臨，我感到興奮，接下來(lái)介紹我的 寒假計(jì)劃，最后自己認(rèn)為這個(gè)寒假將使非常有意義的。此處用了 made a plan list， spend some time studying， stay at home，take a rest等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。