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11．假如你是李平，準備參加學校組織的英語征文比賽．請根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，介紹今天在你校操場舉行的"ONE for ONE"圖書義賣活動的情況并談談你的感受．
注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱．
2．語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范．
3．詞數(shù)80左右．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
This afternoon a charity sale was held on the piayground in our school．Its purpose was to donate books to children in poor areas．If you bought one book，you gave a new one to a child in need at the
same time．All the teachers and students took an active part in this event．Everyone looked quite happy．
As we know，books are bridges to knowledge．If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more knowledge，he will have more chances of success．In this way，his life can be greatly improved．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇圖畫作文，要求是假如你是李平，準備參加學校組織的英語征文比賽．請根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，介紹今天在你校操場舉行的"ONE for ONE"圖書義賣活動的情況并談談你的感受，寫作內(nèi)容應該包括：1．簡要介紹活動的情況．2．談談自己的看法．介紹活動時可以用第三人稱，時態(tài)用一般過去時；談自己的感受時用第一人稱，用一般將來時，也可以用到情態(tài)動詞can/should 等．文中可以多處用到if引導的條件狀語從句，讓文章更出彩．

解答 This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our school．Its purpose was to donate books to children in
poor areas．If you bought one book，you gave a new one to a child in need at the same time．All the teachers and students
took an active part in this event．Everyone looked quite happy．
   As we know，books are bridges to knowledge．If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more
knowledge，he will have more chances of success．In this way，his life can be greatly improved．

點評 本題是一篇圖畫作文，這種題型的解題要點在于：（1）結合線索，弄清圖畫內(nèi)容，把握情節(jié)線索（2）結合提示詞，明確考查意圖．本題還給出了起始句（這就給出了時態(tài)），學生運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型，作適當展開，聯(lián)想，就能比較完整地表達出畫面的意思了．