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5．提示：老師是火種，點(diǎn)燃了學(xué)生的心靈之火；老師是石級(jí)，承受著學(xué)生一步步踏實(shí)向上 攀登．但現(xiàn)在很多同學(xué)總是對(duì)老師有抵觸情緒，總覺得老師對(duì)他們太嚴(yán)格，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這種情 況，換位思考一下，假設(shè)你是一位老師你會(huì)怎么做？悉心教導(dǎo)勸誘，做一名溫柔的好老師，成為學(xué)生的好朋友？還是嚴(yán)加管理，做一個(gè)學(xué)生都害怕的嚴(yán)師？請(qǐng)以"If I am a teacher"為題，寫一篇英語短文．
題目：If I am a teacher
要求：1）語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔．不得少于 60 個(gè)詞；
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If I am a teacher，I will be strict to my students，but if a student does something wrong，I won't tell him off or punish him，I will just talk to him like a friend and tell him what he has done wrong．This way，maybe the student will listen to me and not do the same thing again．At least this is much better than criticizing the student and having him hate you for the rest of his live!．

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分析 【高分句型一】
①If I am a teacher，I will②be strict to my students如果我是一名老師，我將會(huì)對(duì)我的學(xué)生嚴(yán)厲．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí)．
②be strict to sb對(duì)某人嚴(yán)格．
【高分句型二】
I will just talk to him like a friend and tell him what he has done wrong我將會(huì)和他象朋友一樣交談告訴他他的錯(cuò)誤所在．
what he has done wrong作為tell的賓語從句．

解答 If I am a teacher，I will be strict to my students，【高分句型一】（嚴(yán)厲）but if a student does something wrong，I won't tell him off or punish him，I will just talk to him like a friend and tell him what he has done wrong【高分句型二】．（像朋友一樣）This way，maybe the student will listen to me and not do the same thing again．At least this is much better than criticizing the student and having him hate you for the rest of his live!

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