Question

8．良好的習慣成就美好的未來．作為青少年，如何培養(yǎng)良好的習慣呢？請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示以"How to Develop Good Habits"為題寫一篇英語短文．詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
內(nèi)容提示：（1）上課認真聽講，做筆記；  
（2）每天按時完成作業(yè)；
（3）閑暇時多讀課外書籍；       
（4）每周鍛煉3至4次；
（5）多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃垃圾食品；
（6）補充一至兩點良好的習慣，并談談它們對身心健康的影響．
要求：（1）要點齊全，條理清楚，語句通順，不要逐字翻譯．
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名，否則不予評分．
How to Develop Good Habits
It's very important for us to have a good habit．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇說明文，要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；話題是"如何培養(yǎng)良好的習慣"，內(nèi)容包括：良好習慣有哪些？如何培養(yǎng)？對我們有什么影響？在提出"培養(yǎng)良好的習慣"的建議時，可用表示建議的表達方式：should/shouldn't…；had better…；It's necessary to do sth．等等．

解答 寫作范文：It's very important for us to develop good habits．As teenagers，what should we do？In my opinion，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day．In spare time，we had better read some books to get more knowledge．Also，we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food．It's necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week．What's more，to get enough sleep，go to bed early and don't stay up late．Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean．Exercise is fun and relaxing．It's healthy for the mind and body．Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily．

點評 為了使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，自然流暢，段落之間要使用適當?shù)倪^度語，句子之間要使用合理的邏輯銜接詞．如：also；what's more；in my opinion等．