Question

【題目】

假如你是Wendy，你準(zhǔn)備邀請(qǐng)Millie去揚(yáng)州動(dòng)物園游玩，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Millie寫一封邀請(qǐng)信。

A trip to Yangzhou Zoo
位置	城東， 離市中心不遠(yuǎn)
環(huán)境	空氣新鮮。春天鳥語(yǔ)花香。里面動(dòng)物種類多，有……(列舉一些動(dòng)物)
活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目	劃船，看動(dòng)物表演，玩游戲
交通方式	公交車，半小時(shí)
集合地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間	校門口、周日上午8點(diǎn)
對(duì)這次游玩的憧憬	……

要求：1.文章條理清楚，語(yǔ)句連貫，必須包含以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)100左右

3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Dear Millie，

We are going to have a trip to Yangzhou Zoo this Sunday.

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Would you like to come with us?

Yours，

Wendy

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Millie，

We are going to have a picnic at Yangzhou Zoo this Sunday. Yangzhou Zoo is in the east of Yangzhou. It is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about half an hour by bus. The air is fresh there. In spring， the park is full of flowers and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. In the zoo， you can see funny monkeys， gentle pandas， tall giraffes and many other animals. We also can row a boat， watch animal shows or play games there. We will meet at the school gate at 8：00 am this Sunday. I am sure we’ll have a good time in the zoo.

Would you like to come with us?

Yours，

Wendy

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and、also，以及固定句型如It is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about half an hour by bus.等等，這些都為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。