Question

【題目】根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80-100詞。

每年十月份，越來越多的游客來本溪賞楓葉。請你根據(jù)以下提示，說說如何給游客可留下“景美人更美”的好印象，從自身做起，做文明本溪人！

提示詞：beautiful views美麗的景色

要求：

1．語意連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名與校名。

3. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves (楓葉) in October.

Answer 1

【答案】How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves（楓葉）in October. Let's leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views , but also as a Benxi citizen. How to be a polite citizen?

First, We must be friendly. Use"please,OK,welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors. Besides, we should be ready to help others.Try to be a helpful person. If visitors need us,we should help them. What's more, we should follow the rules. For example,we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers. We mustn't drop litter carelessly. At last, we also need to behave well in public. We stand for our city Benxi in public. So it needs our good manners.

Why not do as above points?Let's try our best to be a polite citizen.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。首先要認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關系；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以便使文章更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。注意不要遺漏任何要點內(nèi)容。最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查字數(shù)是否符合要求。