Question

假如你是林莉，你的美國(guó)筆友湯姆給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，他想了解中國(guó)父母跟孩子的關(guān)系和美國(guó)有什么不同。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給他回一封郵件。
提示：
1.中國(guó)父母不習(xí)慣對(duì)孩子說“我愛你”等親昵話，而美國(guó)父母則經(jīng)常用言語(yǔ)表達(dá)對(duì)孩子的愛。
2.中國(guó)孩子對(duì)父母不能直呼名字，而在美國(guó)這是可以接受的事情。
3中國(guó)父母習(xí)慣照顧孩子到很大，而美國(guó)父母大多鼓勵(lì)孩子獨(dú)立做事。
要求：
1.郵件包含所有的提示信息；2.意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；3.詞數(shù)要求：80---100詞。（郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）   提示詞：acceptable.接受的；independently.獨(dú)立地
Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your e-mail. The relationship between parents and children in China is different from that in America.___________________________________________________
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Yours,
Lin Li

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your e-mail. The relationship between parents and children in China is different from that in America.American parents often express their love to their children with the words in daily life, while the Chinese parents are not used to speak so directly, such as the word" I love you'’ to their children. And also the Chinese children can not call the name of the parents, compared with in USA, this is acceptable.  Chinese parents often take care the children until they graduate from the high school or the university, But in USA, most of the parents just encourage the children to be confident and work independently.
Yours，
Lin Li

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一封電子郵件。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。