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7．衛(wèi)生健康飲食：健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題．我校要舉行以"關(guān)愛健康"為題的主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑢懸黄?0字左右的發(fā)言稿（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
主要內(nèi)容有：保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方法或結(jié)論，你對(duì)健康的看法（如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持飲食平衡，多鍛煉以健身強(qiáng)體，減少不良習(xí)慣 ）
Dear boys and girls．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise，eat more junk food，and they usually do not have enough time to sleep今天，許多青少年不健康，因?yàn)樗麄兩龠\(yùn)動(dòng)，多吃垃圾食品，他們通常沒有足夠的時(shí)間睡覺．這是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
高分句型二：If we wish to keep fit，we should follow the following advice如果我們想保持健康，我們應(yīng)該遵循以下建議．這是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear boys and girls，
I'm talking about how to keep fit．Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise，eat more junk food，and they usually do not have enough time to sleep．（高分句型一）（目前的現(xiàn)狀）If we wish to keep fit，we should follow the following advice：（高分句型二）
Firstly，we must keep taking exercise every day，and eat lots of fruit and vegetables． Secondly，we should try to sleep for about 8 hours a night，and remember to"early to bed early to rise"． Finally，we should stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs． Besides（除此之外），we don't forget to breathe （呼吸）the fresh air in the open air．And remember to keep happy every day．（保持健康的方法）
That is my advice．I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life．（祝福）

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ)，烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．