Question

【題目】Jack 和她的父母在生活和學習上有很大的分歧：

	父母	Jack
周末參加志愿者活動	浪費時間，影響學習	獲得強烈的滿足感，幫助他人就是幫助自己。
假期打零工(do part-time jobs)	年紀太小，會遇到危險	學到很多生活經(jīng)驗和生活技能
和學習差的同學交朋友	影響學習成績，人會變壞	......

假如你是Jack,請根據(jù)以上表格信息寫一封信跟父母溝通一下，闡明自己的觀點和想法以得到父母的認同。

可適當發(fā)揮。字數(shù)不少于80詞。

Dear father and mother,

It’s my first time to write a letter to you. I know you love me, but there are some different ideas about life and study between us. So I want to tell to make myself understood.

All in all, I hope to do what I love to do. Hope you can understand.

Your son

Jack

Answer 1

【答案】Dear father and mother,

It’s my first time to write a letter to you. I know you love me, but there are some different ideas about life and study between us. So I want to tell to make myself understood.

My parents think it is a waste of time for me to take part in volunteer activities on weekends. However, I think doing that not only satisfies me but also helps others. I want to do part-time jobs during holidays. They think it is dangerous for me to do it because I am too young. I think I can get much experience and life skills by doing part-time jobs. I would like to make friends with classmates who are weak in study. My parents don’t want me to be their friend because they are worried about my results. But I think the classmates don’t affect my study. I can’t go a bad boy either.

All in all, I hope to do what I love to do. Hope you can understand.

Your son,

Jack

【解析】本文敘述的是Jack 和她的父母在生活和學習上有很大的分歧，因為敘述的是父母的觀點及自己的觀點，所以句子的主語應該用第一人稱和第三人稱的形式，句子的時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，短文用了一些短語和句式，如：write a letter to sb給某人寫信；make oneself done使某人自己被理解；do part-time jobs做兼職工作； make friends with sb和某人交朋友，句式：it is a waste of time for sb to do sth對于某人來說做某事是浪費時間。用了what引導的賓語從句，用了that引導的賓語從句，用了連詞but，增加了文章的亮點。