Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)：

假如你叫李平，上周你的父母帶你去北京旅行了。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)的信息提示，給你在美國(guó)的筆友John寫(xiě)一封信，講述一下你的旅行經(jīng)歷。

Weather	hot
Beijing	beautiful and clean
How did you go there?	by train
What did you do ?	visit the Great Wall play in the Beijing Amusement Park take a walk in Xidan Shopping Street

要求：語(yǔ)句通順，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)完整；60詞左右。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

Dear John:

I’m happy to write to you. Last week

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We had great fun there. I hope you can have a chance to visit Beijing.

Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m happy to write to you. Last week I went to Beijing with my parents. It’s the capital of China. And it’s a beautiful and clean city. We went there by train. The weather was hot. We visited the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. They were beautiful. Then we played in Beijing Amusement Park. It was really exciting. On the last day, we took a walk in Xidan Shopping Street.

We had great fun there. I hope you can have a chance to visit Beijing.

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以李平的名義給筆友John寫(xiě)一封信，講述一下去北京旅行的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)提示，短文要講述天氣、對(duì)北京的總的感受、如何去的及在北京參加的活動(dòng)等等。要求語(yǔ)句通順，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)完整。短文用第一人稱，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。要注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確構(gòu)成及時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文開(kāi)頭總體說(shuō)明了上周去了北京，說(shuō)明了對(duì)北京的感受：美麗、整潔；然后具體地描述了在北京旅行的各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。敘述清楚，具體生動(dòng)。包含了提示的所有要點(diǎn)，層次分明，重點(diǎn)突出。