Question

【題目】書面表達

Write at least 60 words with the topic “A heavy smog day” .（以“大霧霾天”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）

提示：去年12月上旬，杭州籠罩在茫茫的霧霾（was shrouded in heavy smog）中，陷于重度污染（severe pollution）。人們戴口罩（wear masks）出行，霧霾天給人們的健康帶來危害，給生活和工作帶來不便（inconvenience）。請你就其中某一天，描述你的經(jīng)歷和感受。

Since last December, Hangzhou has been in severe pollution____________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Since last December, Hangzhou has been in severe pollution with heavy smog, which has caused a series of inconveniences and health threat to people’s life.

I still remember one dim morning. I was greeted by the heavy haze instead of birds’ singing and the fresh morning air as before. Then on the way to school, my father’s car moved like a snail with the visibility less than 500 meters. What’s worse, our PE lesson was canceled that day because of the poor weather. So we had no choice but to stay in the classroom, looking outside at the quiet playground, missing the laughter and joy once there.

How I wish there will be some relief tomorrow and that fresh air will come back soon.

【解析】

亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如in severe pollution，heavy smog，a series of，be greeted，instead of，on the way to school，like a snail，less than，what’s worse，because of，have no choice，but to，look outside，at the quiet playground，come back等。而Since last December, Hangzhou has been in severe pollution with heavy smog, which has caused a series of inconveniences and health threat to people’s life. / How I wish there will be some relief tomorrow and that fresh air will come back soon.等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。