Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

以“My Mother”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80字左右短文介紹你媽媽。

1. 外貌：高且苗條，有一頭烏黑的長(zhǎng)發(fā)，喜歡穿裙子和靴子，看起來(lái)又年輕又漂亮。

2. 職業(yè)：在家附近的一家大商場(chǎng)里做售貨員，對(duì)顧客（customers ）很友好。

3. 生活方式很健康，每天走路去上班，吃很多蔬菜和水果。

4. 你很愛(ài)你的媽媽，因?yàn)?/span>……（自擬一至兩點(diǎn)）

My Mother

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Mother

My mother is tall and slim. She has long black hair. She likes to wear dresses/skirts and boots. It makes her look young and pretty.

She is a shopkeeper in a shopping mall near our home. She is kind to customers.

She has a healthy lifestyle. She walks to work every day and eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.

I love my mother very much, because she loves me very much.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己媽媽的情況，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如She has a healthy lifestyle. She walks to work every day and eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。