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3．新海浪樂(lè)隊(duì)是一支受歡迎的樂(lè)隊(duì)．以下是有關(guān)這支樂(lè)隊(duì)的一些信息，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的信息寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，不少于80詞．

Name of Band：New Ocean Waves	It was founded in October of 2004
The things they have done： 1．had three major concerts =2．made a hit CD 3．won the best new group of the year	The things they are going to do： 1．to appear on CCTV 2．to go on a world tour next month 3．to have a number one hit some day

Do you know the New Ocean Waves？It's one of the best bands．It was founded in October，2004．
In the past years the band has made great progress．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．Best of all，it won the Best New Group of the year．
They have new plans this year．They are going to appear on CCTV．They plan to go on a world tour next month，so don't miss them if you have a chance to go to their concerts．They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．The band is on its way．
Let's say good luck to them and wish them success．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹一下新海浪樂(lè)隊(duì)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)介；新海浪樂(lè)隊(duì)，建立于2004.10
2．事跡；開(kāi)了三場(chǎng)演唱會(huì)，一張流行的CD，獲得最佳新樂(lè)隊(duì)
3．計(jì)劃打算；上CCTV，下個(gè)月環(huán)球旅行，有一天成為最流行的樂(lè)隊(duì)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make progress 取得進(jìn)步
not only…but also 不僅…而且…
be going to 打算
good luck 好運(yùn)
【高分句型】
1．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．
not only…but also 不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等的成分．
2．They plan to go on a world tour next month，①so don't miss them ②if you have a chance to go to their concerts．
①so連詞，表示所以，不能與because連用．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．
believe后是that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Do you know the New Ocean Waves？It's one of the best bands．It was founded in October，2004．（簡(jiǎn)介）
In the past years the band has made great progress．It not only had three major concerts，but also made a hit CD．【高分句型】Best of all，it won the Best New Group of the year．（事跡）
They have new plans this year．They are going to appear on CCTV．They plan to go on a world tour next month，so don't miss them if you have a chance to go to their concerts．【高分句型】They believe that they will have a Number One hit some day．【高分句型】The band is on its way．（計(jì)劃打算）
Let's say good luck to them and wish them success．（祝愿）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖表類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法．