【題目】假如你是李華，最近你和同學(xué)們經(jīng)常談?wù)撟罹磁宓娜恕Ｄ秤⑽木W(wǎng)站正在舉行“A Person I Admire”的征文活動，請你寫一篇短文參加此次活動。談?wù)勀阕罹磁宓娜耸钦l，他/她是什么樣的人，以及你敬佩他/她的原因。

提示詞語：kind， helpful， have some difficulties， encourage， solve the problems

提示問題： Who is the person that you admire?

What is he/she like？

Why do you admire him/her？

【答案】

The person I admire is my English teacher， Ms Liu. She is kind and helpful. She is very popular among us because she spends lots of time on lessons and has a good sense of humor. When we have some difficulties in our studies， she encourages us to work on and tells us how to solve the problems. She is common， but I admire and love her.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。注意主謂一致。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文根據(jù)問題提示簡明、扼要地介紹了自己最欽佩的人，包含了所有提示用語以及提示問題。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用非常準(zhǔn)確。完全符合題目要求，語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。When we have some difficulties in our studies， she encourages us to work on and tells us how to solve the problems.語法運(yùn)用比較精煉。

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