Question

9．假設(shè)你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，最近你們班正在就"成長(zhǎng)的煩惱"展開(kāi)討論．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一封信給你的外國(guó)朋友Tom，告知討論內(nèi)容．
注意：詞數(shù) 90 左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
Recently our class has talked about"Growing pains"of students，and the main ways to deal with the problems as follows．
First of all，at school we can't get on well with some of our classmates．What's worse，when we can't achieve satisfying grades，we may suffer from great pressure．In addition，our parents are hard on us and we are often forbidden to chat online or play computer games at home．
Faced with such growing pains，firstly，we are supposed to have more heart to heart talks with our classmates and take part in more activities to know more about each other．Secondly，we need to relax ourselves and turn to our teachers and classmates when necessary．Finally，we should respect our parents and more communication is necessary．In that case，we are sure to understand each other better．
Luckily，the growing pains do not last．I believe they will finally change into some valuable experience for our future life．Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①What's worse，②when we can't achieve satisfying grades，we may suffer from great pressure更糟糕的是，當(dāng)我們不能獲得滿(mǎn)意的成績(jī)，我們就會(huì)有很大的壓力．
①What's worse，更糟糕的是
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
we need to relax ourselves and turn to our teachers and classmates when necessary．當(dāng)有需要的時(shí)候我們需要放松自己，找老師和同學(xué)幫忙．
when necessary是when it is necessary的縮寫(xiě)．

解答 Dear Tom，
Recently our class has talked about"Growing pains"of students，and the main ways to deal with the problems as follows：
First of all，at school we can't get on well with some of our classmates．What's worse，when we can't achieve satisfying grades，we may suffer from great pressure．【高分句型一】In addition，our parents are hard on us and we are often forbidden to chat online or play computer games at home．（煩惱）
Faced with such growing pains，firstly，we are supposed to have more heart to heart talks with our classmates and take part in more activities to know more about each other．Secondly，we need to relax ourselves and turn to our teachers and classmates when necessary．【高分句型二】Finally，we should respect our parents and more communication is necessary．In that case，we are sure to understand each other better．（對(duì)策）
Luckily，the growing pains do not last．I believe they will finally change into some valuable experience for our future life．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

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