Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的Drama Club剛剛成立, David想要參加。請(qǐng)以David的名義寫(xiě)一份100詞左右的自我推薦信給Mr Smith。申請(qǐng)書(shū)要包括以下內(nèi)容：

姓 名	David
班 級(jí)	九年級(jí)一班
性 格	樂(lè)于助人，有條理。
愛(ài)好和特長(zhǎng)	喜歡繪畫(huà)，擅長(zhǎng)……。
	喜歡看電影，擅長(zhǎng)……。
	喜歡讀關(guān)于……的書(shū)，特別喜歡讀關(guān)于……的書(shū)。
經(jīng) 歷	曾經(jīng)幫助警察抓住了小偷。
加入俱樂(lè)部后的打算	……（至少一點(diǎn)）。

注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名。

2.內(nèi)容完整、層次清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫。

3.請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

4.文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr Smith,

I am David. I am a student in Class One, Grade Nine. I would like to join the Drama Club in our school.

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Yours Sincerely

David

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr Smith,

I am David. I am a student in Class One, Grade Nine. I would like to join the Drama Club in our school.

I am very helpful. I often give seats to people in need on the bus. I am organized, too. I always plan everything I should do very well.

I like drawing and I can draw very well. It is one of my hobbies now. I also like listening to music when I am free. I am good at acting. I can play many roles if necessary. Books are always my good friends. I like reading books about travelling . Those about the great people are my favourite.

I once helped the police catch a thief by calling the police in time. I learned a lot from that. I became more responsible than before.

If I have a chance to be a member of the Drama Club. I will try my best to do anything good for it. If not, I will also try to be a good student and a good citizen. I am looking forward your answer. Thank you.

Yours Sincerely

David

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文不僅語(yǔ)言清晰流暢，簡(jiǎn)潔自然，而且要點(diǎn)全面。文中的這些連接詞的使用不僅很好的起到了承上啟下的作用，而且使文章上下銜接自然，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明。文中出現(xiàn)的大量I also like listening to music when I am free. I am good at acting. I can play many roles if necessary. Books are always my good friends.反映出作者詞匯的豐富，也使文章更加簡(jiǎn)潔明了，清晰易懂。