Question

9．你學(xué)校最近開展"美好校園"的系列活動(dòng)，你參加了"美好校園，從我做起"的演講，請(qǐng)以"Start out small"為題，寫一篇演講辭，內(nèi)容必須包括：
1．描述圖中校園內(nèi)的不良行為；
2．自由發(fā)揮，描述其他一至兩點(diǎn)校園內(nèi)的不良行為；
3．發(fā)表你的校園文明倡議．

注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；
2．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分．
Start out small
Hello，everyone．It's nice to speak about what we can do for our school…Firstly，in order to save water，we should never forget to turn off the tap after we wash hands or other things．But some of us often forget it．Secondly，we should protect the trees and grass which make our school beautiful．For example，we should follow the rules and not play football on the grass．Besides，don't litter around．It's a good habit to put the rubbish into the rubbish can and keep our school clean and tidy．At last，we shouldn't write on the wall．Let's start out small．Only in this way can we make our school beautiful．So we can study in a beautiful and comfortable environment．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是以"Start out small"為題，根據(jù)圖中的學(xué)校中不文明行為發(fā)表倡議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．描述圖畫；忘關(guān)水龍頭，草地上踢足球，亂扔垃圾
2．倡議；
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
in order to為了
turn off 關(guān)掉
forget to do sth忘記做某事
keep sth+adj 保持某物怎樣
follow the rules 遵守規(guī)則

【高分句型】
1．Firstly，①in order to save water，we should never ②forget to turn off the tap ③after we wash hands or other things．
①in order to為了，做目的狀語．
②forget to do sth忘記做某事，turn off 關(guān)掉
③after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
2．Secondly，we should protect the trees and grass①which②make our school beautiful．
①which作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，which作為從句的主語．修飾先行詞the trees and grass
②make sth+adj 讓某人怎么樣
3．Only in this way can we make our school beautiful．
only短語放句首引起主謂倒裝．

解答 Start out small
Hello，everyone．It's nice to speak about what we can do for our school．Firstly，in order to save water，we should never forget to turn off the tap after we wash hands or other things．【高分句型】But some of us often forget it．（第一幅圖）Secondly，we should protect the trees and grass which make our school beautiful．【高分句型】For example，we should follow the rules and not play football on the grass．（第二幅圖）Besides，don't liter around．It's a good habit to put the rubbish into the rubbish can and keep our school clean and tidy．（第三幅圖）At last，we shouldn't write on the wall．（第四幅圖）Let's start out small．Only in this way can we make our school beautiful．【高分句型】So we can study in a beautiful and comfortable environment．（倡議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖片作文．根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容和要求，以"美好校園，從我做起"為主題描述一些校園內(nèi)不文明現(xiàn)象，圖片已經(jīng)給出我們?nèi)�點(diǎn)提示，要求我們自己適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，再寫出一條．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．如：in order to"為了"；forget to do sth"忘記做某事"；It's a good habit to do put the rubbish into the rubbish．"將垃圾扔進(jìn)垃圾箱是好習(xí)慣．"以及倒裝句的使用．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．