Question

【題目】近年來，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大變化，請你根據(jù)下表提示，以“ChangesinMyHometown”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文,介紹一下你家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生的變化。

In the past	living conditions: poor houses: small , dark roads: narrow, not many ring roads Education: few children had the chance, receive
Now	living conditions: improve a lot houses: tall , bright roads: more and more ring roads, appear（出現(xiàn)） education: modern schools, Internet

ChangesinMyHometown

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Answer 1

【答案】The Changes in My Hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, people lived a poor life. The houses were small and dark. The roads were narrow and there were not many ring roads. Few children had the chance to receive education.

Now our living conditions have improved a lot. People are living in tall and bright buildings. What’s more, more and more ring roads appear. There are many modern schools and the children can learn lessons on the Internet.

I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future and people will live a better life.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，以“ChangesinMyHometown”為題寫一篇短文,介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生的變化。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：people lived……，The roads were……, There are……, I hope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。