Question

【題目】時下越來越多的人使用智能手機（smart phone）。智能手機給我們生活帶來便利的同時，也產生許多不好的影響。我們身邊有很多“低頭族（phubbers）”。請根據所給要點信息，寫一篇短文告誡身邊的同學。

What advantages and disadvantages have smart phones brought us?

Tell us one of your unhappy experiences about using smart phones.

What will you do with your own smart phone?

要求：1．詞數90左右。題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

2．所寫內容必須包括所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。

3．不得出現真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。

Refuse to be phubbers

More and more people are using smart-phones nowadays.

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Answer 1

【答案】Refuse to be phubbers

More and more people are using smart phones.

Smart phones are helpful to our lives. We can use them to read news, shop online and so on. But some of us play with them too often. It has caused bad effects on us. Phubbers can be seen here and there.

One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smart phone while walking. A car nearly hit me. How terrible! I won’t do it any more.

I won’t spend much time on smart phones because it’s bad for my health and study. I will use my smart phone wisely and try not to be phubbers. (96 words)

【解析】

本題是話題作文。學生首先要認真審題,確定文章的中心。智能手機給我們生活帶來便利的同時，也產生許多不好的影響。即寫作時要寫利弊，最好分段來表達。此外，還可以穿插描述一些現象比如低頭族，手機控等。文章最后可以寫自己的感悟和將要采取的措施等。寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時還要注意:1.書寫規(guī)范；2.可適當加入細節(jié),使內容充實,行文連貫；3.寫完后要認真檢查是否有漏寫要點,有無拼寫錯誤等。高分句型：Smart phones are helpful to our lives.智能手機對我們的生活很有幫助。We can use them to read news, shop online and so on.我們可以用它們來閱讀新聞，網上購物等等。One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smart phone while walking.一個星期天的早晨，我邊走邊看我的智能手機。How terrible! I won’t do it any more.真可惡!我不會再做了。I won’t spend much time on smart phones because it’s bad for my health and study.我不會花很多時間在智能手機上，因為它對我的健康和學習不好。