Question

【題目】書面表達。

下周班會，英語老師要求每個同學(xué)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，分享一下學(xué)習英語的經(jīng)驗。你可以談?wù)剬τ⒄Z學(xué)習的認識、你的學(xué)習方法以及你的要求和建議。請根據(jù)下列提示詞寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

提示詞：important, useful, improve, listen, practice

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone! I think English is widely used and useful in the world. It’s important for us to learn it well.

I am interested in English. But at the beginning, I was weak in it. With the help of my teacher and classmates, I have made great progress. I did a lot to improve my English. First, I listened to my teacher carefully at class and made some notes so that I could review my lessons after class. Second, I practiced listening and speaking a lot. I was not afraid of making mistakes. I also tried to read more English magazines and stories.

I hope my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us. I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class.

Then I’m sure we will make great progress in learning English.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如I did a lot to improve my English. practiced listening and speaking a lot.等，But at the beginning,等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。