Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) (15分，含卷面分2分)

下面是一位11歲的女孩Lily一天的活動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的簡介，寫一篇短文 。

Lily’s Day

6:00a.m. 起床，刷牙

6:20a.m. 吃早飯(牛奶、雞蛋和面包)

6:40a.m. 騎自行車上學(xué)，花費(fèi)大約一刻鐘

7:10a.m.—11:30a.m. 有4節(jié)課，最喜歡英語

2:10p.m.—3:40p.m. 通常有2節(jié)課

3:50p.m.—4:50p.m. 課后活動(dòng)一小時(shí)

5:00p.m. 回家

6:00p.m.—8:00p.m. 做家庭作業(yè)

9:00p.m. 上床睡覺

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Lily's Day

Hello,I have a good friend.Her name is Lily. She is 11 years old.Let me tell you about Lily's day.She usually gets up at 6:00 in the morning.Then she has breakfast at 6:20, she has bread, an egg and milk for breakfast. Next,she goes to school at 6:40. She has four classes from 7:10a.m. to 11:30a.m.. Her favorite subject is English, because she think it is interesting. She has two classes from 2:10p.m. to 3:40p.m. She can have do after-class activities for an hour from 3:50p.m. to 4:50p.m. After that, she goes home at 5:00p.m. She does her homework for two hours . She goes to bed at 9:00. She has a busy but happy day.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Lily一天的活動(dòng)情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Her name is…，She has..., She can....以及Her favorite subject is...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【寫作亮點(diǎn)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友Lily以及她的年齡，接下來介紹她一天的活動(dòng)情況，最后總結(jié)她這一天忙碌但快樂。此處tell sb about sth, go to school, from....to..., for an hour等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。