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3．保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)．在建設(shè)綠色襄陽(yáng)的過(guò)程中，我們每一個(gè)人都貢獻(xiàn)著自己的力量．請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章，介紹你所參加的一次環(huán)�；顒�(dòng)．
1．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示：
1）你在何時(shí)何地參加過(guò)什么樣的環(huán)保活動(dòng)；
2）在此次活動(dòng)中你都做了哪些事；
3）參加此活動(dòng)你有什么感受．
2．寫(xiě)作要求：
短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所提示的要點(diǎn)．語(yǔ)言要流暢．可圍繞提示要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使短文的意思連貫；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名；短文的詞數(shù)在90詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Nowadays our school is caught in rubbish，which we  dealt with我們學(xué)校最近到處是垃圾，我們進(jìn)行了處理．
whic引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面的rubbish．
【高分句型二】
In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment，there will be less pollution and our life will be better．
①I(mǎi)n a word，總之，插入語(yǔ)．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主將從現(xiàn)．

解答 My classmate and I took part in a school activity for environmental protection．Nowadays our school is caught in rubbish，which we  dealt with．【高分句型一】（你在何時(shí)何地參加過(guò)什么樣的環(huán)�；顒�(dòng)；做了哪些事；）Even if we are making great efforts，supports from different walks of life are still needed．Most importantly，the government should not permit littering．Only by doing this can we bring benefits to the environment．
In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment，there will be less pollution and our life will be better．【高分句型二】
"There is only one earth"，I hope everyone will protect our environment well．（感受．）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類(lèi)作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．