Question

【題目】假設(shè)你和家人4月5號(hào)到北京旅游，根據(jù)下面所給表格內(nèi)容寫一篇日記，介紹一下你們的旅游經(jīng)歷。

How was your trip?	Wonderful.
How did you go to Beijing?	By train.
How long did you stay there?	For six days.
What did you see?	Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, the Great Wall.
What did you do?	Climbing the Great Wall.
What did you eat?	Beijing Roast Duck.

Answer 1

【答案】

On April 5th, my family and I went on a tour to Beijing .We went to Beijing by train. And we stayed there for six days.

we first went to the heart of China-Tian’anmen Square.It is one of the largest squares in the world. On one side of the square is the Great Hall of the People and on the other side is the Museum of Chinese History. A lot of people from all over the world come to visit the square every day.Then we went to the Forbidden City,I thought that was really beautiful The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are!

Next two days we visited the Palace Museum and felt excited. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum, you can go to Beijing and have a look.On the last day ,we visited the Great Wall. It is very long and old.. It has millions of bricks. Each brick is very big and heavy. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall.but I was happybecause I know the chinese saying：One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero！

As for food, I thought Beijing Roast Duck was tasty. I like it very much. I really enjoyed the trip to Beijing.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用表格的給材料作文。本文是一篇描述假期旅游的文章，所以主要時(shí)態(tài)是過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。當(dāng)在描寫景點(diǎn)時(shí)，可以根據(jù)需要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要是采用第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)。在寫作時(shí)注意把景點(diǎn)描述全，同時(shí)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮補(bǔ)充一些相關(guān)內(nèi)容，是文章飽滿，豐富。注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文所給材料直接，不易發(fā)揮。但作者詳細(xì)的描述了各景點(diǎn)的特色，可見(jiàn)英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)的扎實(shí)。同時(shí)引用諺語(yǔ)One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero！不到長(zhǎng)城非好漢。更給文章增色不少。為了寫好文章，平時(shí)就要多積累一些詞匯，名言等。