Question

20．書面表達(dá)．請你以MyHobbies為題，寫篇英語短文．
要求：
1．在My后面加上適當(dāng)?shù)脑~補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題．
2.80個(gè)詞左右．
3．字跡工整，語言規(guī)范．
4．鼓勵(lì)寫出真情實(shí)感．
5．中文不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、地址、學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I used to ride a bike and read story books我過去經(jīng)常騎自行車和讀故事書．used to do sth．固定句型，過去經(jīng)常做某事．
高分句型二
 I thought pets were very friendly and lovely我認(rèn)為寵物非常友好和可愛．
這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I thought是主句，后面的是賓語從句，注意時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)．

解答 My Hobbies
     Different people have different hobbies．I have some hobbies，too．【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】I used to ride a bike and read story books【高分句型一，注意固定句型的使用】．They could give us lots of knowledge．I keep cats and dogs．I thought pets were very friendly and lovely【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】，but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet，because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship．
     I have different hobbies in different seasons．In spring I like flying kites．In summer I go swimming．I often climb hills in the fall．I like making snowmen best in winter．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹愛好】

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．