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11．學(xué)習(xí)方法，自我反思，合作交流，同伴互評是學(xué)習(xí)過程中幾個重要的方面，其中，有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法能使你的學(xué)習(xí)境界大開，讓學(xué)習(xí)成為一種享受．

在你初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)過程中，你一定會有一些好的學(xué)習(xí)方法與你的同伴分享，請按以下要求寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容必須包含以下要點(diǎn)：
•your goood learning method（s）
•an experience that you helped your partners
•your thoughts and feelings
要求：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右，提示詞僅供參考；
      2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名．

Answer 1

分析 本文需要我們根據(jù)題目所給的信息，用英語寫一篇關(guān)于好的學(xué)習(xí)方法和同伴分享的小作文．學(xué)生的生活多姿多彩，其主導(dǎo)作用的還是學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活．首先要說明你有什么樣的學(xué)習(xí)方法，然后敘述你幫助同學(xué)的經(jīng)歷，最后表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和感情．題目信息展示給我們幾條信息，我們在寫作時，要包含這些內(nèi)容，并且適當(dāng)拓展．寫作時，敘述和同學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，可以一般過去時態(tài)為主要時態(tài)．

解答 參考范文：Good learners must have good ways．Discussing in a group really helps me have a better understanding of what I've learned．It broadens our mind and allows us more chances to express our thoughts．
Shy and nervous，my classmate Jeff used to hide himself behind books．Answering questions in public was quite a difficult job for him．Once our math teacher asked us to solve a difficult problem．I encouraged Jeff to discuss his idea with us and we found his way was so creative．Then we advised him to write his answer on the blackboard and explain it to us．Believe it or not，he did it and we saw his great improvement after that．
Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me．Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning．By discussing，we learn more wisely and better．

點(diǎn)評 此題為提綱作文，要抓住內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，敘述出來．寫作時還要注意多種時態(tài)的交叉使用．語句流暢，句式新穎，內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確是一篇好的習(xí)作的成功之處．