Question

生命在于運(yùn)動(dòng)，目前全國(guó)人民都在進(jìn)行全民健身運(yùn)動(dòng)。運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目形式多樣，請(qǐng)你從以下幾個(gè)角度展開(kāi)，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于運(yùn)動(dòng)和健康的文章。

People	old and young, men and women,……
Places	in the park, in the communities, , in the gym,……
Kinds of sports	Yoga, running, swimming, Taiji, ball games,……
Your choice and reasons	……

注意： 1部分內(nèi)容已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 要使用表格中的所有信息，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
　　　 3. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和姓名。
4.選擇適合你的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目并給出充分理由。
Nowadays, sports are more and more popular._______________________________________

Answer 1

One possible version：
  Nowadays, sports are more and more popular. As the saying goes,“Life lies in sports”.Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. So old and young, men and women actively do sports. They can do sports everywhere, such as in the park, in the communities, in the gym, where we can see them exercise.
There are many kinds of sports, such as Yoga, running, swimming, Taiji, ball games. Now I have to do so much homework after school that I have no time to take part in sports. Therefore, I choose to run or walk on the way home from the school after school. In this way, I can save time in learning, as well as play sports.

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹全民健身運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性，運(yùn)動(dòng)種類(lèi)以及適合自己的運(yùn)動(dòng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：They can do......， I choose to run……，I have no time to ......及There are......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己選擇適合自己的運(yùn)動(dòng)的理由。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了全民健身運(yùn)動(dòng)的地點(diǎn)和重要性，接下來(lái)介紹全民健身運(yùn)動(dòng)的種類(lèi)，最后指出適合自己的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式。此處用了 keep healthy ，take part in，in this way， as well as等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。