Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，是個(gè)籃球愛(ài)好者。這個(gè)學(xué)期你校籃球隊(duì)開(kāi)始招募隊(duì)員，你想報(bào)名參加，但是你的父母不同意，你很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的提示，寫(xiě)一封信給你的英語(yǔ)老師Miss Chen，向她傾訴你的煩惱及希望得到她的幫助。

父母的觀點(diǎn)	1. 經(jīng)常訓(xùn)練，影響學(xué)習(xí)；
2. 有時(shí)會(huì)去參加比賽，無(wú)法上課；
3. 容易受傷。
你的觀點(diǎn)	… …

要求：1、要點(diǎn)完整，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確；

2、70詞左右(已給出的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

提示詞：agree(同意)，get hurt(受傷)

Dear Miss Chen,

I am not very happy these days. You know I like basketball very much. This term our school

basketball team needs new players.                                                  

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                              

What should I do, Miss Chen? Could you please give me some advice?

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

        

Dear Miss Chen,

I am not very happy these days.You know Ilike basketball very much.This term our school basketball team needs new players. I want to join it,but my parents don’t agree.They think if I am in the team,I’ll have to practice often and it will be bad for my study.Sometimes I can’t have classes because there will be some basketball games.And they also worry about that I’ll get hurt when I play basketball.But I don’t think so.Sports are good for our health.It can make us strong.Playing basketball is very interesting and I can get more fun so that I can learn well. It really want to be a basketball player in the team.

What should I do,Miss Chen?Could you please give me advice?

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章主要是李華加入籃球隊(duì)的申請(qǐng)。文中使用了I don’t think so，worry about等較高級(jí)的句型和動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，而且還應(yīng)用了動(dòng)名詞playing做主語(yǔ)，和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞have to，系動(dòng)詞get后跟過(guò)去分詞 hurt作表語(yǔ)以及使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞and，if等為文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。