Question

14．假定你是陽光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你校外籍教師Mr．Johnson兩年的志愿教學(xué)期將滿，即將回國，請你寫一封道別信．請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示完成信件，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Frank Johnson，American Teaching course：Spoken English Ways of teaching：lively；  interesting Personality：creative； hard-working； organized； Thanks and wishes：自擬

要求：
1文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
2 詞數(shù)：90個左右．
Dear friend，
How time flies！
                                                                    
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①As you always②made your lessons lively and interesting，I ③am really fond of your lessons．因為你總是讓你的課堂生動有趣，我真的喜歡您的課．
①as因為，引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
②make+sth+adj讓…怎樣
③be fond of 喜歡…
【高分句型二】
①Even though you may go back to your own country，I will always②stay in touch with you．即使你要回到你的家鄉(xiāng)，我會一直與你保持聯(lián)系．
①even though即使，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句．
②stay in touch with sb 與某人保持聯(lián)系．

解答 Dear Friend，
How time flies!Learning that you are leaving our school，I really feel sorry about it．It has been two years since you first came to our school．As you always made your lessons lively and interesting（教學(xué)方式），I am really fond of your lessons．【高分句型一】Moreover，you are very creative，hard-working and organized．（性格）With your help，I made rapid progress in my English speaking．Thank you a lot．And I have made up my mind to contribute to the society in the future just as you did to us．Even though you may go back to your own country，I will always stay in touch with you．【高分句型二】I wish you success for the future!（感謝和祝福）
Yours，又不聽話，
Li Hua

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