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假設(shè)你叫林洋，收到了你的筆友Susan的一封信，請(qǐng)你給她寫一封回信。在信中回答她的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

Dear Lin Yang,

I have a problem these days. My mother doesn’t allow me to watch TV even on weekends. She says as a middle school student, my job is to study. After I finish my homework, she says, I should read books and watching TV is bad for me. But I think I need a rest and watching TV helps me learn a lot too.

Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my mother’s decision? What should I do?

Yours,

Susan

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

I don’t have this problem. My mother allows me to watch TV after I have finished my homework.

I think your mother shouldn’t do like this. As a student, study is our main job, but it is not all of our life. We also need a rest and enjoy ourselves. Watching TV is a good way for us to relax. Besides, some TV programs are good for our study.

I think you should talk about it with your mum. Look for some information on the Internet to help you. You can also ask your father for help.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作首先表明自己有沒(méi)有這方面的問(wèn)題，如沒(méi)有可以開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山的切入主題I don’t have this problem.然后對(duì)他媽媽的做法自己表示并不贊同，并陳述理由，學(xué)習(xí)并不是生活的全部study is our main job, but it is not all of our life.看電視也是對(duì)于我們放松是非常好的方法Watching TV is a good way for us to relax.同時(shí)一些電視節(jié)目對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)幫助也是非常大的some TV programs are good for our study.最后表明自己的看法和建議，如多和媽媽進(jìn)行溝通you should talk about it with your mum.或者向爸爸尋求理解和幫助You can also ask your father for understanding and help.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作

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