Question

【題目】May和好朋友Jane所在的格林中學(xué)（Green Middle School）一直很重視對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行環(huán)保教育。學(xué)校開辦了一些俱樂部，專門吸納對(duì)環(huán)保感興趣的同學(xué)。以下是May和Jane正在談?wù)摳髯宰钕矚g的俱樂部和她們的一些想法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇文章。

寫作內(nèi)容：

姓名	May	Jane
最喜歡的俱樂部	Saving Trees Club	Helping Animals Club
原因	樹對(duì)人類很重要，但卻越來越少， 我們應(yīng)盡力拯救它們。	動(dòng)物是人類的朋友，但很多動(dòng)物現(xiàn)在卻處在危險(xiǎn)之中，有的即將滅絕，我們因該盡力保護(hù)它們。
方法	多種樹，節(jié)約用紙。	建議多建立野生保護(hù)區(qū)，不獵殺野生動(dòng)物；素食等。

要求：

1. 表達(dá)清楚、語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 應(yīng)用表格中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 80詞以上。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：die out滅絕；extinction n. 滅絕；wild life reserve 野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)；vegetarian n. 素食者

May and Jane come from Green Middle School. They are talking about their favorite clubs.

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Answer 1

【答案】May and her good friend Jane's are in Green Middle School. They have always attached great importance to environmental education for students.

May’s favorite club is Saving Trees Club. She thinks trees are very important to human beings, but they are becoming fewer and fewer. We should try our best to save them. She also thinks we should more trees, and save paper.

Jane’s favorite club is Helping Animals Club. She thinks animals are our friends, but many of them are in danger now. Some of them are going extinct. We should try our best to protect them. She suggested that more wildlife reserves should be established instead of hunting wildlife and vegetarianism.

【解析】

這是一篇表格作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下May和Jane各自最喜歡的俱樂部和她們的一些想法。所提供的材料中列舉了她們最最喜歡的俱樂部、原因和方法。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

She thinks trees are very important to human beings, but they are becoming fewer and fewer. 她認(rèn)為樹木對(duì)人類非常重要，但是它們變得越來越少。句子trees are very important to human beings做think的賓語。

【高分句型二】

She suggested that more wildlife reserves should be established instead of hunting wildlife and vegetarianism. 她建議建立更多的野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)，而不是狩獵野生動(dòng)物和素食。

that more wildlife reserves should be established instead of hunting wildlife and vegetarianism.是由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。