Question

【題目】假如你是某校七（2）班的班長吳兵，請根據(jù)下列表格中的要點寫一封推薦信，推薦你班的林濤為本年度的青年獎獲得者。

姓 名	林濤
性 格	善良，友好，聰明，學(xué)東西快。
愛 好	他擅長繪畫, 拉小提琴；養(yǎng)了一只貓，很懶，喜歡睡在他腿上；還有一只鸚鵡，會重復(fù)他說話，他喜歡教她說英語。
學(xué)習(xí)情況	1.各門功課成績好，對令人驚奇的事情了解很多。 2.最喜歡英語，每天花很多時間練習(xí)說英語。
主要事跡	他樂于助人，上周……

具體要求如下：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2.必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當發(fā)揮；

3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I would like to recommend Lin Tao for this year’s Youth Award.

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We all think Lin Tao should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Wu Bing

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,

I want to recommend Ricky for this year’s Youth Award.He is kind,friendly and helpful.He likes reading and playing badminton.He is good at organizing class activities.He is a top student and has good grades in all subjects.He knows a lot about history.He likes English best.He spends a lot of time practicing speaking English every day. Last week a little boy lost his way.He took him to the police station.The boy’s parents were very grateful to him.I will be very happy if he can get this award.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Wang Lei

【解析】根據(jù)提示可知這是一封推薦信，所以一定要符合書信的書寫格式，因為這是推薦別人，不是自薦信，所以句子的主語應(yīng)該是第三人稱單數(shù)，這里敘述的是他平時的表現(xiàn)，所以句子的時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，要注意主謂一致，當然上周發(fā)生的事情要運用一般過去時來描述。

【亮點說明】本文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：I want to recommend Ricky for this year’s Youth Award. He spends a lot of time practicing speaking English every day. .I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.等。短文還用了一些連詞如and，if等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)不再單一。