Question

【題目】書面表達。

請根據(jù)下列對鹽城濕地的描寫寫一篇90詞左右的短文。

要點：1. 鹽城， 江蘇北部的一個城市，以其擁有的濕地而出名。最大濕地面積450，000多公頃，是眾多瀕危鳥類的理想棲息地。

2. 食物豐富，有許多昆蟲(insect)和多種植物。

3. 許多鳥類在那兒生活，最有名的是丹頂鶴，每年許多丹頂鶴在這兒過冬。

4. 自己的感想。（至少兩點）

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Answer 1

【答案】

Yancheng is a city in the north of Jiangsu . It is famous for its wetlands. The biggest wetland there has an area of more than 45,000 hectares. It’s an ideal shelter for many endangered birds.

There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the wetland. They provide birds with enough food. So there are lots of birds living in the wetlands. The red-crowned cranes are the most famous birds in Yancheng wetlands. Every year, a lot of red-crowned cranes stay here for winter.

Wetlands are perfect homes for birds and animals, we must take actions to protect our wetlands. If we don’t, it will be impossible to see many endangered birds in the future.

【解析】

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