Question

2．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"A difficult choice I had to make．"（以"一個艱難的選擇"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格．）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
Using the following points as a reference．（以下問題供參考）
1．Have you ever had a difficult choice to make？
2．What made it so difficult for you？
3．What was your final decision？
4．Do you think it is a right decision？
Our lives are the sum of all our choices．The decisions we make today，may very well play a critical role in our future tomorrow．When I was thirteen，my mother always wanted me a girl who was good at school work．However，I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，which was not allowed by her．As a result，we quarreled with each other a lot．As time passed by，I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable，no matter what he would be in the future．I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby．Knowledge is power，and I think the choice I've made must be wise one．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①When I was thirteen，my mother always wanted me a girl②who was good at school work．當(dāng)我十三歲的時候，我媽媽總是希望我是一個學(xué)習(xí)好的女孩．．
①when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
②who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾先行詞girl，在從句中作邏輯主語．
高分句型二：
However，I ①was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，②which was not allowed by her．然而，我很喜歡打鼓，不喜歡學(xué)習(xí)，這是她不允許的．．
①be keen on doing sth喜歡做某事
②which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的整個句子．

解答 【范文】
A difficult choice I had to make
Our lives are the sum of all our choices．The decisions we make today，may very well play a critical role in our future tomorrow．When I was thirteen，my mother always wanted me a girl who was good at school work．【高分句型一】However，I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，which was not allowed by her．【高分句型二】As a result，we quarreled with each other a lot．【詳細敘述一件讓我感到很難選擇的事情】As time passed by，I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable，no matter what he would be in the future．I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby．【最終的決定】Knowledge is power，and I think the choice I've made must be wise one．【我認為這是正確的決定】

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