Question

11．你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正在開展主題為"What should a good teacher be like？"的討論，為此你采訪了一些學(xué)生和家長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文進(jìn)行交流，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)．

學(xué)生主要觀點(diǎn)	家長(zhǎng)主要觀點(diǎn)	你的觀點(diǎn)
與學(xué)生相處融洽 課堂生動(dòng)有趣	學(xué)識(shí)廣博 嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生	…

注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；
（3）詞數(shù)：80～100詞（短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
What should a good teacher be like？
Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
they think a good teacher should get along well with their students他認(rèn)為一個(gè)好老師應(yīng)該和他門的學(xué)生相處的好．
think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning對(duì)于好老師來(lái)說(shuō)最重要的事情是相信鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生，特別是那些學(xué)困生．
 who have difficulties in learning是who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾those．

解答 What should a good teacher be like？
Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．
As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．【高分句型一】And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．（學(xué)生主要觀點(diǎn)）Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．（  家長(zhǎng)主要觀點(diǎn)）
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．【高分句型二】Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫，這樣在寫作時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．