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【題目】母愛(ài)深沉, 母愛(ài)無(wú)價(jià)；學(xué)會(huì)感恩, 學(xué)會(huì)回報(bào)。某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息, 寫(xiě)一篇短文, 介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。
提示：短文應(yīng)包括導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息, 條理清楚, 行文連貫, 段落分明；短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；詞數(shù)不少于80, 開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. ……

Answer 1

【答案】My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn't have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at weekends. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up, I will do what I can do to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I'll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That's what she wants most, I think.
【解析】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)出順序的詞來(lái)表達(dá)文意更清楚。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。