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17．我國是一個發(fā)展中國家，我們應該勤儉節(jié)約，使中國成為一個節(jié)約型的社會．我們中學生應該從身邊的點滴做起，節(jié)約能源． 你是如何做的？請你就這一個話題寫一篇80字的短文．要點要求：
1．騎自行車到校，不乘公交車和出租車．
2．離開教室，記著關燈，不用水時，請關水龍頭．
3．有空時，收集空瓶子和廢紙．
4．節(jié)約錢，不花太多的錢在昂貴的東西上．
5．不砍樹，保護環(huán)境，節(jié)約能源．
參考詞匯：water tap，cut down，energy．

Answer 1

分析 ①First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．首先，最好騎自行車上學，不要坐公共汽車或出租車．句子考查It's best to do sth最好做某事，是個固定句型，take a bus/taxi乘公共汽車/出租車．
②Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．此外，我不會花太多的錢買昂貴的東西．句子考查spend money on sth表示花費錢買某物．

解答 China is a developing country．How to save environment？（引出話題）I think we should do the followings：First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．Second（高分句型），I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom．Turn off the water tap when I‘m not using it．Third，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling．Fourth，it is important to save water and money．Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things（高分句型）．Last，we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees．（為保護環(huán)境所采取的措施）I'll try my best to save the energy，I hope I can do something for our country．（我的希望）

點評 這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯．在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，使文章自然流暢．同時，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：it's best to do sth、it is important to  do sth、remember to do sth、turn off、in my free time、spend---on、had better、take care of、try one's best to do sth以及序數(shù)詞first、second等，這為文章增色不少．在學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．