Question

Cherry 是Lily的一個朋友，她最近很苦惱，因為她太癡迷于電腦游戲，學習成績下降了，父母對她也有意見。她寫信給Lily，讓Lily幫她解決這個問題。
請你以Lily的名義給她提供一些建議。詞數(shù)80左右
提示：1.get a letter from     2.play computer games  3.do badly in   4.the most important   
5.for a long time      6.be bad for           7.suggestion    8.have a talk
9. say sorry to       10.spend more time     11.work hard    12.hope
Dear Cherry,
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
Yours,
Lily

Answer 1

Dear Cherry,
I got a letter from you. I am sorry to hear that. I know that you like playing computer games very much. So you do badly in your lessons, and your parents are angry with you. In my opinion, the most important thing is to work hard. If you play computer games for a long time. It is bad for your health. Do you agree? Then I make a suggestion. You will have a talk to your parents and say sorry to them. Please spend more time studying your subjects. Then you should work hard. I hope you’ll do well in them. I believe you.
Yours,
Lily

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】本文能夠充分運用提示詞進行，詳細說明了朋友的煩惱所在，并且對此事發(fā)表了自己的看法與見解。見解可行，符合事實，多數(shù)學生存在的問題，倡議大家正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)，正確分析原因。語言運用正確，是一篇合格的作文。