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5．你校將于近期舉辦一場(chǎng)主題i"怎樣成為一名受歡迎的學(xué)生"的演講比賽，假如你是王華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)和要求，以"How to be a popular student？"為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)演講稿．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總次數(shù)．
要點(diǎn)：1．衣著整潔，常常微笑；
2．誠(chéng)實(shí)善良，樂(lè)于助人；
3．懂得與他人分享；
4．其它．
要點(diǎn)：1．內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言流暢，不要逐句翻譯，自由地適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名和其它真實(shí)信息．
How  to be a popular student？
Hello，everyone!I am Wang Hua…        ．
That's all，Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．以"How to be a popular student？"為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱主要為第一人稱．
    寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．本題考生可從四個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．衣著整潔，常常微笑；
2．誠(chéng)實(shí)善良，樂(lè)于助人；
3．懂得與他人分享；
4．（可自由發(fā)揮）做一個(gè)好的聽眾，并且學(xué)習(xí)用功，成績(jī)好．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
受到…的歡迎 be popular with
衣著整潔dress well
不僅…而且…not only …but also …
更重要的是What's more
遇到麻煩 in trouble
高分句型：
1．If we can do this，others will think we are easy to get along with．如果我們做到這一點(diǎn)，別人就會(huì)認(rèn)為我們很好相處．
if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來(lái)
 2．It's also important to be good listeners．做一個(gè)好的聽眾也是很重要的．
It's+形容詞+to do  做某事…it作形式主語(yǔ)
3．What's more，we should be helpful，and always try to help people who are in trouble．更重要的是，我們應(yīng)該樂(lè)于助人，盡量去幫助那些遇到困難的人．
who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾表人的先行詞people，表示"遇到困難的人"

解答 How  to be a popular student？
     Hello，everyone!I am Wang Hua．Most students want to be popular with others，but not everyone can achieve this goal．How to be a popular student？In fact，it is very simple．
     First，we should keep ourselves stay in good shape and dress well．Because of this，we will not only look better but also feel better．In addition，we should always smile and we should also be honest．If we can do this，others will think we are easy to get along with（高分句型）．（衣著整潔，常微笑，誠(chéng)實(shí)）
   It's also important to be good listeners（高分句型）．In this way，people would like to talk with us about their problems．What's more，we should be helpful，and always try to help people who are in trouble（高分句型）．It's necessary to be active and warm-hearted．（做一個(gè)好的聽眾，樂(lè)于助人）Of course，as a student，we should work hard and know how to share．（學(xué)習(xí)用功，懂得分享） If we can do all of the above，we will make friends and be more popular．
    That's all，Thank you for your listening．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)，要先確定好時(shí)態(tài)，再注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．