Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

武漢東湖綠道是國內(nèi)首條城區(qū)內(nèi)5A級旅游景區(qū)綠道。本周末你們班將去東湖綠道參加步行活動。請用英語里一份口頭通知。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 周六上午8點(diǎn)在學(xué)校大門口集合；

2. 最好乘公共交通工具出行，而不是讓父母開車送你到校；

3. 不要隨處扔垃圾.請自帶垃圾袋, 或?qū)⒗�圾扔進(jìn)垃圾箱；

4. 步行活動大約需要兩小時(shí)。五點(diǎn)乘地鐵返校；

5. 補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人想法或建議。

注意：

1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2. 詞數(shù)60-80；

3. 內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；

4.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：trash bag 垃圾袋 public transportation公共交通

My dear fellows，

This weekend, our class are going to join the Public Walk on the East Lake Greenway.

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Answer 1

【答案】My dear fellows,

This weekend, our class are going to join the Public Walk on the East Lake Greenway.

We will meet at the school gate at eight on Saturday morning. It' s better to take public transportation instead of having your parents drive you to school.Besides, don' t throw rubbish everywhere. Please bring your own trash bags or throw the rubbish into the bins. The activity will take us two hours and we will take the subway back to school at 5 p.m.

I think the activity is very meaningful and it can help us to realize the importance of environmental protection.

【解析】

本文是武漢東湖綠道的步行活動類材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來寫作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時(shí)還要注意:1.書寫規(guī)范；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫；3.寫完后要認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫要點(diǎn),有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型：It' s better to take public transportation instead of having your parents drive you to school.與其讓你的父母開車送你上學(xué)，不如乘公共交通工具。Besides, don' t throw rubbish everywhere.此外，不要到處亂扔垃圾。Please bring your own trash bags or throw the rubbish into the bins.請自帶垃圾袋或?qū)⒗�圾扔進(jìn)垃圾箱。The activity will take us two hours and we will take the subway back to school at 5 p.m.這次活動將花費(fèi)我們兩個(gè)小時(shí)，我們將在下午5點(diǎn)乘地鐵回學(xué)校。I think the activity is very meaningful and it can help us to realize the importance of environmental protection.我認(rèn)為這個(gè)活動是非常有意義的，它可以幫助我們認(rèn)識到環(huán)境保護(hù)的重要性。