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11．今年眉山中考網(wǎng)上填報(bào)志愿．你班在班會(huì)上舉行了一次填報(bào)高中志愿的討論．一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為在本市（地）高中就讀比到外地高中就讀有利；一些同學(xué)則認(rèn)為到外地高中就讀較有利．請(qǐng)依據(jù)下表所提供的信息，以李明的名義給校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道．

	有利因素	不利因素
本地就讀	1．便利 2．費(fèi)用少	1．周圍老同學(xué)多，易結(jié)伴玩耍、上網(wǎng) 2．不利于獨(dú)立
外地就讀	1．條件較好 2．住讀有助于培養(yǎng)自主能力	1．費(fèi)用高 2．生活不便，往返時(shí)間長(zhǎng)

要求：1、字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右（開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，且不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
2、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息．
3、可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但必須包含表格所提供的信息，并簡(jiǎn)要表述你的觀點(diǎn)．
4、參考詞匯：condition．條件．n．；expenses．費(fèi)用．n．；independent  獨(dú)立的．a(chǎn)dj．
Dear editor，
I'm a student in Class One，Crade Three．In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we'd better enter，the schools in or out of our city．Some students think it's convenient to study in our city．Studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way．
Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it's helpful for students to learn to be independent．Besides，without so many old classmates out of our city，they would have less chance to play or surf the Internet together．
The discussion was exciting．I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages．As for me，I prefer studying in my own city．
．Yours．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以李明的名義說(shuō)說(shuō)在本地就讀和外地就讀的利與弊．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一及第三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
一．本地就讀 有利因素1．便利2．費(fèi)用少   不利因素 1．周圍老同學(xué)多，易結(jié)伴玩耍、上網(wǎng)2．不利于獨(dú)立
二．外地就讀 有利因素1．條件較好2．住讀有助于培養(yǎng)自主能力   不利因素1．費(fèi)用高2．生活不便，往返時(shí)間長(zhǎng)

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be helpful for 對(duì)…有幫助
surf the Internet 上網(wǎng)
prefer doing sth 寧愿做某事
as for sb 至于某人
【高分句型】
1．Some students think①②it's convenient to study in our city．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句
②it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
2．Studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way．
動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
3．Besides，①without so many old classmates out of our city，they would have less chance②to play or surf the Internet together．
①without介詞，除了…后加名詞代詞動(dòng)名詞．
②動(dòng)詞不定式做后置定語(yǔ)，修飾chance．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm a student in Class One，Grade Three．In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we'd better enter，the schools in or out of our city．
Some students think it's convenient to study in our city．【高分句型】（本地就讀 便利 ）Studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way．【高分句型】（外地就讀 費(fèi)用高 往返時(shí)間長(zhǎng)）
Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it's helpful for students to learn to be independent．（外地就讀 有利因素1．條件較好2．住讀有助于培養(yǎng)自主能力）Besides，without so many old classmates out of our city，they would have less chance to play or surf the Internet together．【高分句型】（本地就讀 不利因素 1．周圍老同學(xué)多，易結(jié)伴玩耍、上網(wǎng)）
The discussion was exciting．I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages．As for me，I prefer studying in my own city．
Yours 
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．
寫(xiě)出順序的詞來(lái)表達(dá)文意更清楚．完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．
這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．