Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

以My hometown為題, 寫一篇70詞左右的短文。要求語言通順，意思連貫，可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

要點(diǎn)：1. 空氣清新，路旁滿是花草樹木；鎮(zhèn)中心有許多高樓；

2. 有超市，影院，中餐廳，西餐廳；可以購物，享受美食；

3. 每天有公共汽車去鎮(zhèn)中心；我乘公共汽車上學(xué)，大約花費(fèi)15分鐘。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown is a beautiful place.The air is fresh and clean.There are lots of trees and flowers on both sides of the road. And there are many tall buildings in the center of the town.There are also supermarkets,cinemas,Chinese restaurants and western restaurants.We can go shopping and share delicious food here.Every day,buses can go to the center of the town.I can take buses to school.It takes about 15 minutes to school.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如here are also supermarkets,cinemas,Chinese restaurants and western restaurants.We can go shopping and share delicious food here.等等。