Question

【題目】Write at least 60 words with the topic “The most unforgettable experience”. 請你以“最難忘的經(jīng)歷”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)

提示：在每個人的成長過程中，肯定都有令人難忘的經(jīng)歷，給人帶來深刻的印象，對人的成長具有重要的作用。請你就其中的一件最難忘的事進行描述，與大家分享。

要求：內(nèi)容切題、語句通順、意思連貫、字跡清楚。

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

unforgettable experiences, the most unforgettable, Why is it …?

Answer 1

【答案】

The most unforgettable experience

I have the most unforgettable experience.One day,I argued with my friends. They hold the view that fast food is tasty and eating fast food can save plenty of time so that they can keep up with the pace of the time. In addition, they consider it a symbol of fashion.

However, some young people are against eating fast food, because it’s rich in fat and can make them gain weight. Besides, businessmen sell fast food with the purpose of making money. What’s worse, the majority of the fast food isn’t healthy, which does harm to the young generation’s health.

In my point of view, it’s a waste of money eating fast food. We ought to eat as little fast food as possible. The major principle of a diet is eating environmentally friendly food.

【解析】

試題分析：這是篇話題作文，要靠學(xué)生自己組織內(nèi)容，難度較大大。在寫作時要注意謀篇布局，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯與連詞，使文章更地道流暢。

寫作亮點：這篇短文句式應(yīng)用較多。例如However, some young people are against eating fast food, because it’s rich in fat and can make them gain weight. Besides, businessmen sell fast food with the purpose of making money.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。