Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)以“my friend”為題，寫一篇作文，詞數(shù)70左右，文章要包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

基本情況	Millie, 12歲，英國(guó)人，短發(fā)，大眼睛，是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)(Sunshine Middle School)七年級(jí)一班學(xué)生。
學(xué)習(xí)情況	最喜愛的學(xué)科是數(shù)學(xué)，經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。
生活方式	經(jīng)常吃漢堡、雞肉和巧克力，很少吃蔬菜。她在兩頓飯之間吃甜食，很少運(yùn)動(dòng)。她需要改變生活方式了。
興趣愛好	喜歡打排球，聽音樂(lè)，是讀書俱樂(lè)部的一員。最喜歡的節(jié)日是萬(wàn)圣節(jié)，因?yàn)樗�喜歡捉弄她的朋友們。

My friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

My friend

My friend is Millie.She is 12 years old. She is English.She has a big eyes with short hair. She studies in Sunshine Middle School.She is in Class 1,Grade7.Her favourite subject is math.She often helps others to study.She often eats hamburgers,chicken and chocolates.She seldom eats vegetables.She eats sweets between two meals.She seldom does sports.She needs to change her life.She likes playing volleyball.She thinks that listening to music makes her relaxed.She is a member in the reading club.Her favourite holiday is Hallowmas because she likes playing tricks on her friends.

【解析】

試題分析：短文介紹自己朋友Millie的情況，所以句子的主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該用第三人稱單數(shù)，句子的時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意所寫的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，句子上下文之間的銜接。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：She needs to change her life.She likes playing volleyball.She thinks that listening to music makes her relaxed.She is a member in the reading club.用了連詞because和that引導(dǎo)的從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。