Question

【題目】【2014年湖南省婁底市中考】

請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。

Time	Good habits	Bad habits
In the morning	Get up early	Eat junk food for breakfast
In class	Ask some questions	Quarrel(爭(zhēng)吵) with her classmates sometimes
After school	Always exercise	Go home late
In the evening	Help her parents with housework	Watch TV or play computer games for more than an hour

要求：1、語(yǔ)言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。

2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

3、詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞。

4、文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Dear Mary,

I’m very glad to introduce(介紹) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?

Yours

Huang Deshun

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫(xiě)作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫(xiě)作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫(xiě)作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.