Question

【題目】假設你是李華，你的朋友劉明在學習、生活等方面遇到了一些問題和困難，所以他經常感到焦慮和郁悶。請你根據以下內容給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，幫助他克服焦慮情緒，輕松、快樂地學習和生活。

內容包括：1. 每個人都會有苦惱、焦慮的時候；

2. 一定要告訴別人你的煩惱；

3. 遇到任何困難時，與同學交流和老師、家長及時溝通；

4. 可就如何輕松、快樂地學習和生活等適當發(fā)揮。

作文要求：1. 不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出現學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名；

2. 語句連貫，計數80個左右。作文開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：焦慮的 anxious 與……溝通 communicate with 變得輕松 get relaxed

解決問題 solve problems

Dear Liu Ming,

Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes._______________________________________________

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Liu Ming,

Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others when you are anxious. It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily.

Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.

Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.

Please do remember: you’re not alone. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如feel worried or sad，all right，It’s good to do，communicate with，in trouble，solve the problems，listen to，take part in，outdoor activities，try to do，no matter，in the end等。而It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble./ No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.等多種復雜從句結構和Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.

/Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.等非謂語動詞結構的綜合運用，豐富了習作內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。